Love me for my simplicity,
And not my pretence..
Love me out of spontaneity,
And not out of pity..
Love me for what I am,
And not what you expect out of me..
If my love calls for you,
Come for spending a lifetime with me..
And not for leaving me bereaved once again..
Listen to what the good in me tries to speak to you,
And not the wrongs that shadow on the surface..
.......... Go deep inside of me and look at my Ocean of love for you,
The Sun out there rises to see you and sets in hope to see you once again..
there you'll also find a sweet home I've created using the sands of hope,
for you and me.. I've also engraved our names together on the sands,
washing out which even the Ocean never dares..
.. And in the night if you walk beside it,
you'll hear my love deeply calling out for you ..........
Allow me to fly along with my Dreams,
And not chain me to the realities of life..
I want to fly high to this beautiful land i see above.. with you,
and not stare at it in lonely hours.. without you..
Come to me to fill the colours of Happiness in my naked eyes,
And not give it tears of sorrow and rejection..
Come to accept me with my incompleteness,
And not pointing out at them to make me feel like a loser..
Give me hope, Give me Love,
and not take away the one I only had with me..
Be my Strength,the one I feel proud of,
And not my weakness that I become helpless without you..
Hold my hands and promise you will be there for me.. forever,
And not rudely take your hands out of my tender hold..
Respect my love for you,
and not shun it as my madness..
Feel the miracle created by God,
And not call it just a .. de ja vou..
I need your love and want to be loved by you,
and.... just loved by you.
Sunday, September 21, 2008
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18 comments:
beautiful.....
hey is it ur creation.... SUPERB is d only word....
ya daz my first creation.. thanx.. :)
awesome....ur thoughts r quite philosophical...!!
This girl has so sweet and true thoughts. You have done a brilliant job amul... keep it up....
"Love me for my simplicity,
And not my pretence..
Love me out of spontaneity,
And not out of pity..
Love me for what I am,
And not what you expect out of me..
If my love calls for you,
Come for spending a lifetime with me.."
just awsome!!
great wrds and nice synchronisation of them too , straight from the heart with all great depth and emotons . Good JOB done keep it up MY DEAR AMU
hmmm....i wnt comment on how good it is or not....coz u'v alrdy got it
but i'll give a suggestion..--> i didnt feel "wow" while reading it...lacks in emotions...u still gotta learn to give out emotions thru words.....
ULTIMATE...................
UR LOVE HAS NO BOUNDARIES............
So Amulya Akhtar..gr8 job yaar that to in ur first creation.Its really nice to see beautiful words and thoughs by a beautiful mind.Keep it up
baby its really sweet only a person like you can write it u know the reason why,as i have always stated,my meerabai!
But what you have it in you, the actual thing is still to crave its way out of you.
A brilliant start and surely you have a long way ahead.
just go for it!
awsome, amazing.... well i am not creative as you are therefore felling lack of works to describe how good it is.. but i really liked it and its one of the most butifull and romantic poems which i really liked,...
good work ... god bless you ..
beautiful thoughts jst like ur heart....very nice philosophy....
This one is for the awesome work u have done by givin ur feelings a form tat is expresssive and touchin.... They potray your attitude twds life. Words are few and they always give a meaning new.... The meaning varries from person to person may be its me or you....
nishtha.
one of the best i have ever read and wanted to write something like this but i am not so gud at writing down my thoughts. great piece of art so carry on with ur wonderful gift.
one of the best creations i have ever read and wanted to write something like this but not so gud at writing down my thoughts.utilize ur talent at its best.
beautifully crafted and punctuated them with words having lotta depth .. keep the gud work goin dudette
so sweet,creative mind,keep it up
a giant can understand a giant's strength. if it is your then good. do u tried it to publish. then try.i also write poems
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